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diff --git a/data/location_decks/introduction.yaml b/data/location_decks/introduction.yaml
index 6f28923..9ccd896 100644
--- a/data/location_decks/introduction.yaml
+++ b/data/location_decks/introduction.yaml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'DoNothing'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "Welcome to the tutorial!\nYou can select any tile, but only move in directions with bits set. These are checquered. Now, only the current tile and 1 tile {EAST}.\nSelect {EAST} tile and press {RETURN}."
+      message: "Welcome to the tutorial! You can select any tile, but only move {NORTH,SOUTH,EAST} or {WEST} if those bits are set -- allowed tiles are chequered.\nRight now you can stay on this tile or move {EAST}.\nSelect {EAST} tile and press {RETURN}."
 
   - &STEP1-CARD
     card_name: 'step1'
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'SetBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "Almost there. You have free rein in this column.\nFinish the game by collecting enough {WINTOKEN}. 1 in this level.\nGood luck!"
+      message: "Almost there. You have free rein in this column.\nFinish the game by collecting enough {WINTOKEN}: 1 in this level.\nGood luck!"
 
   - &STEP7-CARD
     card_name: 'step7'
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'GenericBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "We may have lied to you about restricting to this column.\nSet {WEST}. Clear {NORTH,SOUTH,EAST}."
+      message: "We may have lied about restricting you to this column.\nSet {WEST}. Clear {NORTH,SOUTH,EAST}."
       set: [WEST]
       clear: [NORTH, SOUTH, EAST]
 
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'GenericBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "In this board, tiles didn't change. In the random games, after taking an action (or a timer expires) the tile will be replaced.\nSet {NORTH}. Clear {SOUTH,EAST,WEST}."
+      message: "On this board, tiles don't change. In random games, after you take an action the tile will be replaced. Some tiles are also replaced when a timer expires.\nSet {NORTH}. Clear {SOUTH,EAST,WEST}."
       set: [NORTH]
       clear: [SOUTH, EAST, WEST]