shortened and reorganised wording obtile which explains

[naja.git] / data / location_decks / introduction.yaml

diff --git a/data/location_decks/introduction.yaml b/data/location_decks/introduction.yaml
index 721c55c26c095f745edb80c7f106fcd8d57c4e73..eba72a50aca2758fcafc109515e01c2bbcd22093 100644 (file)
--- a/data/location_decks/introduction.yaml
+++ b/data/location_decks/introduction.yaml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'DoNothing'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "Welcome to the tutorial!\nYou can see everything, but only move in directions that you have bits set for. Now, only {EAST}.\nYour movement options are shown as chequered squares."
+      message: "Welcome to the tutorial! You can select any tile, but only move {NORTH,SOUTH,EAST} or {WEST} if those bits are set — allowed tiles are chequered.\nRight now you can stay on this tile or move {EAST}.\nSelect {EAST} tile and press {RETURN}."
 
   - &STEP1-CARD
     card_name: 'step1'
@@ -30,13 +30,13 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'SetBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "Moving to a tile requires picking an action. Some tiles' actions set bits on your robot. Such as the {SOUTH} bit."
+      message: "Moving to a tile requires picking an action. This tile has 2 actions. Both this tile's actions set bits on your robot, the {SOUTH} bit."
 
   - &STEP2-ACTION-NULL
     action_class: 'SetBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "So does this one. See, we gave you a choice!"
+      message: "This is the second choice."
 
   - &STEP2-CARD
     card_name: 'step2'
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'ClearBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "Other tiles' actions clear bits. This will clear {SOUTH} or {EAST}.\nFor the next part of the tutorial, we are going to strictly control your movement bits, so you don't get lost."
+      message: "Other tiles' actions clear bits. This will clear {SOUTH} or {EAST}.\nFor the next part of the tutorial, we are going to control your movement bits strictly, so you don't get lost."
 
   - &STEP3-CARD-1
     card_name: 'step3-1'
@@ -67,13 +67,20 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'SetBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "There are key bits that can be set, such as {RED}. They may be required by actions.\nThis action also sets {EAST,SOUTH}."
+      message: "This action sets {EAST,SOUTH}."
+
+  - &STEP4-ACTION-GREEN
+    action_class: 'GainHealth'
+    required_bits: [GREEN]
+    data:
+      message: "Some actions require key bits to be set.\nIf you haven't got {GREEN} yet, this action is greyed out to show that you can't use it."
 
   - &STEP4-CARD
     card_name: 'step4'
     bits: [RED, SOUTH, EAST]
     actions:
       - *STEP4-ACTION
+      - *STEP4-ACTION-GREEN
 
   - &STEP5-ACTION-BLUE
     action_class: 'GenericBits'
@@ -125,7 +132,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'SetBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "Almost there. You have free rein on this column.\nFinish the game by collecting enough {WINTOKEN}. 1 in this level.\nGood luck!"
+      message: "Almost there. You have free rein in this column.\nFinish the game by collecting enough {WINTOKEN}: 1 in this level.\nGood luck!"
 
   - &STEP7-CARD
     card_name: 'step7'
@@ -167,7 +174,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     required_bits: [GREEN]
     data:
       direction: EAST
-      message: "Some actions change the game board."
+      message: "All of the actions on this tile require {GREEN}. Without it, you can't even enter.\nActions like this one change the game board."
 
   - &STEP10-CARD
     card_name: 'step10'
@@ -178,7 +185,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'GenericBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "We may have lied to you about restricting to this column.\nSet {WEST}. Clear {NORTH,SOUTH,EAST}."
+      message: "We may have lied about restricting you to this column.\nSet {WEST}. Clear {NORTH,SOUTH,EAST}."
       set: [WEST]
       clear: [NORTH, SOUTH, EAST]
 
@@ -192,7 +199,7 @@ _action_definitions:
     action_class: 'GenericBits'
     required_bits: []
     data:
-      message: "In this board, tiles didn't change. In the random games, after taking an action (or a timer expires) the tile will be replaced.\nSet {NORTH}. Clear {SOUTH,EAST,WEST}."
+      message: "On this board, tiles don't change. In random games, after you take an action the tile will be replaced. Some tiles are also replaced when a timer expires.\nSet {NORTH}. Clear {SOUTH,EAST,WEST}."
       set: [NORTH]
       clear: [SOUTH, EAST, WEST]